Yes, Dad.

Yes, Dad.

A Story by Anuradha Verma
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Mild trigger warnings for child abuse.

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Another bruise (another lesson). "Yes, Dad."

© 2014 Anuradha Verma


Author's Note

Anuradha Verma
Written for the contest "Dark six word short story".

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This is amazing!! It is the toughest thing in the world to write a story with a message, especially in such few words. And you, have done a splendid job of it! Hats off! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ouch. I've always liked the idea of stories told in only six words - when they're done well, like this one, they often are some of the most hard-hitting. Nice job, I know these aren't as easy to write as they look. You gave the readers just enough to fill in the gaps. Big thumbs up for you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Anuradha Verma

9 Years Ago

*catches thumbs up and quickly puts in pocket* ;) This was my first time trying one so I'm happy tha.. read more
Now this one appealed to me. Shows more, talks less, leaves the mind to imagination.
Clever; I like the concept but not sure if I'll attempt one.
Good write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Anuradha Verma

9 Years Ago

Alright, I feel like an idiot for asking but, pardon? I didn't get you..
Stonz P.

9 Years Ago

Don't fret over it.
Hint:
What are the priests of the church called?
Anuradha Verma

9 Years Ago

XD XD Nice! I thought it had to do with something like that but I wasn't sure.

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Added on December 5, 2014
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Anuradha Verma
Anuradha Verma

Mumbai, India



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