In the pink

In the pink

A Poem by Antonionioni
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True - I got a new pink electric guitar yesterday!

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My pink guitar, the new love of my life
I’ll stroke and stretch your strings with my fingers
My pick will pick you up just like a wife
On the threshold; let each long lick linger
My salmon pink star, electric singer
Accompany me when my feeble voice
Attempts a duet, plug in amp, tongue a
Hillman Imp to your flash Rock n Rolls Royce
I’ll never smash you, at least not by choice
No Pete Townshend treatment, trouble or strife
No setting alight, Hendrix-style singes
I’ll stay faithful, not just one of the boys
To you my axe that’s sharper than a knife
Clear as a bell pulled by expert ringers

© 2008 Antonionioni


Author's Note

Antonionioni
Dig the cliched analogy of guitar to lover - but this is rock n roll!

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Very enjoyable and I like the sensuality of it too; the last line is just perfect, rounding the poem nicely.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Antonionioni
Antonionioni

Manchester, United Kingdom



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I'm Antonionioni. I also answer to Tony. I try not to be phoney and I try not to be moany. I write a daily sonnet but not only. My writings often get lonely. Please read them and you won't disown me. .. more..

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