Morning's Gental Wake

Morning's Gentle Wake

Golden rays, a morning's kiss,

 Sunlight dances, a joyful bliss. 

Steaming mug, a cozy sight,

 Coffee's warmth, a pure delight.

A gentle wake, a quiet morn,

 As dawn's embrace, the day is born.

 A thoughtful brew, a loving care,

 A peaceful moment, beyond compare.

Children's laughter, a cheerful sound,

 Drifting softly, all around.

 A moment's peace, a tranquil sight,

 As morning's beauty fills the light

Reviews

[maya_online]

This takes such a beautiful upbeat cozy tone, its 9AM where I am, and I have black out shades, but reading this made me want to open it, I love how the mention that there are other people, the rhyming scheme feels warm if that makes sense? Love it!

[Antifranticbabydoll]

I’m so glad, thank you!

[Twilight]

This rhymes perfectly, capturing an idealic morning awakening; presumably for someone who is in a positive state. And, mindful enough to appreciate those calming sensations around her; upon making a start to the day. No man is mentioned, but children are heard. I wondered, if these could just be family members; simply being their happy childlike selves?. Probably, indoors or very nearby; so as to be near enough for the writer to feel that the sound is "all around". And, most likely very young children: because their laughter drifts "softly" - but that quietness could be interpreted as suggesting that they're some distance away..? Interesting and positive, thankyou.

[Antifranticbabydoll]

"a thoughtful bew, a loving care" Was mention to, not very good, to a man bringing her a cup of coffee and the children are hers.
Thank you for reviewing, as always. -M

[Twilight]

Yes, "a thoughtful brew" could well suggest that it was brought by a guy; awoken up with. Just as easily, we tend to associate a coffee ☕ with allocating a few precious moments; to be "thoughtful" and take time out for ourselves...

[Rustling Leaves]

I love this, it's so beautiful. The rhymes and rhythm is so perfect that it's a quaint little poem to read in the morning. Amazing!

[Antifranticbabydoll]

Thank you so much!