amour 2

We dance on the precipice of forever, A delicate balance, fragile and tender. But shadows creep in, a haunting sight, As the sun dips below, stealing the light.

Our souls entwined, a cosmic ballet, Lost in the moment, time stands still, halted. A fiery passion, a burning desire, Igniting our hearts, setting our souls on fire

A whisper of time, a breath of a dream, A fleeting encounter, a transient gleam. Yet in this moment, eternity's found, A love so profound, lost and unbound.

Reviews

[Twilight]

This is brief, in just three verses; and rarely rhymes. However, it has hauntingly romantic essence to it. You seem to have captured the mysterious auro, of how a romantic encounter can pan out. Indeed, appropriately, the first verse is less directly focused on romance; instead trying to depict the fragility of those moments; shortly before a romantic interlude turns into a brazen reality in the two verses which follow. Thanks for sharing.

[Antifranticbabydoll]

Thanks for commenting. :)

[Dave]

My goodness! Oh, to be as young as you and know all that I know now! The missed moments, the kisses never taken or shared. The love that slipped away so easily, not knowing it was even there. Chance your love, trust your heart.
Take care - Dave.

[Antifranticbabydoll]

Thank you for commenting! Best wishes -M

[LisaCarol]

Lovely poem with excellent choice of words, cadence and rhymes.

[Hallow]

Lovely poem. Makes me thunk about how love is supposed to feel. Full and passionate, no matter how long or short.

[Antifranticbabydoll]

I went through and experience with someone where I held back how I felt about them and well, something happened to them. That taught me that I cannot hold back how I feel and I should express it no matter how long I’ve known that person/friend/partner.
Honesty is important.

[Jeyanthi]

It's nice...
maybe it could be love at first sight...
When life is so short, love becomes so brief huh...

The last line says the story...