Their Attention

If I say sorry that's officially me,

But don't think about what I say and such,

Because I'm not really all that deep.

If there's kind words they'd come for free,

But a single wrong and you'd scream so much,

You'd run around like sheep.

Rights stay for a moment visible,

Then an eternity hidden.

Lefts appear,

And then stay that way.

Reviews

[Jesse]

When you say you are really not all that deep, you actually accentuate somehow that you are 'well to me anyways'.... I'm just speaking here that you are a freak in writing 'bro' ....lol. I can grasp your crispness of the write ... quite intelligent man you are.... brittle maybe if I can say that but in a great positive sense in the write. Let me know if I say too much too negative. Anyways cool writing. I look for the shorter poems cause the longer ones sometimes drive me into the 'drama' world and I'm not looking for drama in poetry rather 'art' in one fashion or other. Some poems go into these story telling...and ahhhhh. Anyways love your poetry and I'm nobodies super fan...lol, If I can say it that way. Nice to meet you and add me to friends for the duration of this ride. :), :)

[Anti Phalanx]

Too much negative? Nonsense! Your words are a charm. I'm glad you think that way about my writing. I like to stick to the shorter stuff when writing, I often have the motive to make my point and finish quick as. It can work, but it's not without it's own flaws as a method, haha :) It's a pleasure to meet you too and thanks for the review!