A Stupid Struggle

A thread of hatred,

Snapped & you're snapped,

It's a fine old piece of string,

Long and agitative,

Like pure untouched snow versus a gentle tread,

Or fury in a bottle left uncapped,

Or being alone hoping the phone doesn't ring.

Or trying to find a something to rhyme with 'agitative'.

Reviews

[Daniel Sutheran]

This is gorgeous. I was distressed at one line, and outright laughing at the last.

[Anti Phalanx]

Glad to hear that, it's what I aim for.