Rusting

Rusting

A Poem by glasswindow
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I don't know, it's a soft thought.

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Time has stopped
My hand on your hand
Bound metal rusting in summers rain.
This co-existence unclear
unsure why I feel fear
Because it will eventually stop raining,
or because our end is near?

© 2013 glasswindow


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I feel like I know this situation, so this poem is working. Good imagery. I'm not a big fan of rhyme, clear, fear, near, but that's a matter of taste. Well done.


Posted 11 Years Ago


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glasswindow

11 Years Ago

Admittedly the rhyme scheme is novice. lol. I more or less want to do something very very basic here.. read more
Gabe

11 Years Ago

song lyrics?
glasswindow

11 Years Ago

Nah, just trying to get away with some of the complex stuff, I worry that meanings become to unclear.. read more

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Added on April 6, 2013
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glasswindow
glasswindow

Jamestown, OH



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