Coffee and Ciggarettes

"Things just aren't looking up"
I say while I light another cigarette up
"Things just aren't looking up for me"
I say while looking into another cup of coffee.


Coffee and Cigarettes are all that I need.
No matter how bad it gets
I know that they will never leave me
because they feel greedy
Coffee and Cigarettes yeah that's all I need.

"Things are looking up"
I say while I light another cigarette up
"Things are looking up for me"
I say while drinking some coffee.

At the cafe or my moms house
I enjoy a cup or two
With my friends and their friends
at a party that is awkward
I can always just smoke the night away

Coffee and Cigarettes are all that I need.
So I enjoy a cup or three
and smoke a pack or two.
But no matter what they do to me
they will never treat me like you do.
Coffee and Cigarettes yeah that's all I need.

Reviews

[Archia]

I love the part cigarettes and coffee played in this poem, and how it didn't change from when things were bad to when things were good. The rhyme was really nice and didn't came across as forced, it felt well with the structure of the first and third stanza. Great poem.

[glasswindow]

Thank you so much for the review XD