Gallons of heart-ache Haiku

Haiku about not achieving anything through passion.

Gallons of heart-ache

pouring into life's pitcher

diluting substance

Author's Note

Trying to improve my writing ability to a professional level.

Reviews

[bourgeois hippy]

Ahh, fabulous haiku. Great choice of vocabulary, everything flows (no pun intended!) to a perfect point, and as far as how I understand it, I really like what you're saying...