Words Regretted

Words Regretted

A Poem by AAmell

Words fall off lips like leaves lost to the wind,


And nothing can be saved, nothing controlled.


Time is that one variable that is beyond our hold


Where once words are said, no one can rescind.

© 2017 AAmell


Author's Note

AAmell
A practice with elements such as Consonant sounds (W's, L's, and S's), and Internal Rhyme. The first line hit my brain, and I had to finish the poem from there.

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This poem had interesting rhymes in it! Very good job! The only critique I have is that you put "leafs" instead of "leaves".

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AAmell

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Rachel! I can't believe that slipped past me. I have made the correction.

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Added on December 15, 2016
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Tags: words, regret, argument, time, fleeting, uncontrollable

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AAmell
AAmell

YUCAIPA, CA



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I'm 25 years old, have been married for over 1 year now, have a 2 year old son, am going to school full time for English: Linguistics, and work full time as the sole source of income for my family at .. more..

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