When I am with my husband

When I am with my husband

The days and nights are festive

Even the chaos is meditative

We cook shop gym and talk

Routine is fun round the clock.

 

We are accommodative of each other

in the seasons of winter and summer

we dont ask much from one another

but openly complain if we miss the humour

 

We are seen as jovial life companions

elders and youngsters notice our unions

we love to laugh discuss and plan

our results make us our mutual fans

 

Our extensions are our kids

who see role models amids

when we fight, they feel we need therapy

but soon banter we return to normalcy.

 

Life has been kind and blessed

Our folks have always supported

We took risks and challenges

Together made  big families balance.

 

We learnt that our nation is great

Traditional Patriotism Compassionate

Are qualities we like to integrate

Reaching the summit and more to navigate.

Author's Note

my first poetry, learning to write my thoughts, feeling and thinkings comes easy but articulating the same spirit....haha!

Reviews

[Marie]

A very beautifully penned poem which portrays the very loving relationship shared by two eternal lovers. You both count the blessings in your life together and are so grateful for them. Everything you do you do together with love. A disagreement clears the air between the lovers and they return to normal life and living again. Lovely work, Aarti! So warm, sweet and tender, romantic and like a true fairytale. I so enjoyed reading and thank you for so kindly sharing. Beautiful and brightest blessings to you and your dear husband and family...

[Aarti Sriram]

Thankyou dear Marie for your sweet words and abundant blessings . This is my first attempt at posting a poetry in a forum. You inspire me and fill us readers with your immersive writing and very encouraging reviews. Wishing you a lovely and meaningful every day and times ahead!

[Marie]

Thank you so very much for your so kind words, dear Aarti. You have a beautiful gift and I hope you will explore it fully. I am so looking forward to your next poem to read and comment on. Thank you in advance for sharing. Wishing you a very blessed and beautiful evening to enjoy. Bless you always, dear poetess...

[Jeyanthi]

Hi dear... excellent... the flow of words of your inner feelings and emotions.... it shows good understanding and trust... I'm gonna write poem for my hubby too 💕 now 😅😇🙂

[Aarti Sriram]

Thank YOU for stopping by and taking time to review my writing. Its really encouraging for a newbie like me. Absolutely would love to hear from you on a similar topic ...
Warm cheers,
Aarti Sriram

[Tumi]

very good, understanding played a vital role in relationship
you capture every tender moment and tense moment
there are always good and bad time,
we all need to bond, let go, and detest malice

[Aarti Sriram]

Dear Tumi, Thankyou for stopping by this page. Very kind of you to take time and review my very first lines and sharing your thoughts. Lovesss !