O,Lucifer thou chooseth Iniquity.

Uncreated,yet created firmly seated sat God the uncreated Father Almighty,beholding and rejoicing perpetually concerning the Splendor of creation and the divine image of Himself warmed His sacred heart abundantly,His eyes dazzled at their absolute statue,announcing vibrantly unto all His cheribum,behold my Sons and Daughters,all cheribum in one accord glorified His Creation for all undoubtly was and is praiseworthy,all cheribum ceasesly worshiped all except for One,Lucifer whom reason'd unto himself cunning ideals for this Lucifer was send forth from Gods dwelling.

Reviews

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This was an interesting read. There were many punctuational errors, however, that made it difficult to concentrate.

Overall, nice job.

- Brittney

P.S. Would you mind taking a look at my novel, HIM, please? I'd like to send it in for publishing but won't until I get as much feedback as I possible can. This is where you come in! (: