Is that you?

Is that you?

A Poem by Happy hours
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Sometime when you feel too shallow and missing someone

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Is that 'you' 
Behind that door? 
I'm in love with such Hallucinations


© 2016 Happy hours


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Those lines are overflowing with emotions and mesmerizing...
Creative enough!!


Posted 8 Years Ago


Short but filled with such meaning.
Some people find it so easy to write something so short, and still have so much to say in so very little words.
It impresses me as, I struggle to write such small but meaningful pieces.
Great write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ah! Lovely and clear-cut. When you miss somebody profoundly, you think about her, when you think about her profoundly, it seems as if she is everywhere around you. Nice. Keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Happy hours

8 Years Ago

Thanks dear friend for appreciating my work... :)
Ah, to miss and see them everywhere :) This is concisely beautiful :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Happy hours

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for review... :)
Short and simple but yet so deep. Good Job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Happy hours

8 Years Ago

thanks a lot for the review... :)
When we are in love, we dream. W e want our beloved to be with us all the time. Yes, love is all about dreaming and......We do hallucinate

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Happy hours

8 Years Ago

Yes shabeeh..u r right...
thanks for the review... :)

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Happy hours
Happy hours

Lucknow, Uttar Pradesh, India



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Life is beautiful when 24 hours of a day are happy hours Kindly stop by as i need your reviews and comments Apart from that I love nature and its miracle. I'm passionate for writing, Because whe.. more..

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