False Promises!

Did you ever feel the same?

You know!
What would be easy for you
Standing in front of mirror and making false promises

I mean this is you
None other than you can embarass yourself
Different size of paper lay down on the wooden floor
"Something need to be done" or "to-do" is written on the sheet

Relax! This is 'me' from the inside
Nobody else is watching what you are doing to yourself
To be honest, nobody even care
Keep on doing the same practice again and again

Those torn paper resemble uncanningly with your future regrets
Isn't it?
I mean who care about the time, it just passing by
And at some moment it will stop

Well I must admit, what a unique way to decorate the pale yellow walls
By sticky note, although the words are bold but it's blur
It looks like "someone" forget to check the list of desire

You are standing on a kind of road, if you stop
You will get crushed by good deeds of others
Every single night before you sleep
You try to regain the trust of the soul and mind

But why it shattered with the first second of your morning
Ah! Morning what a gala time it is
It seems to be have no need to rethink of what happend the last night

Intrigued decisions of yours for your good being only
Will they ever succeed?
What let it just go without any diplomacy in your heart

You're faking yourself, and your broken promises
You are embarassed
You are disgusted
But what can you do?
One thing! Lets make another one tonight....

Author's Note

Please note! Its an unedited version probably with bunch of grammatical errors. will update the final draft later. But need a light of improvement

Reviews

[Manisha]

this is stunningly beautiful my friend.....
GOOD JOB...

[Shabeeh Haider]

The resolve to do something is often broken down by a failure to do it. Then we regret the promises that we made and try to reaffirm our resolve.
A nicely written poem but needs some correction

[Happy hours]

well said shabeeh..thanks for the valuable review...
It's an unedited version, soon i will share the updated version of this piece.... keep reviewing