Raam aa gaya

Honest dedication to every soldier

Saare sheher me kohraam aa gaya
Jaane kaha se dekho raam aa gaya

Sardiya abhi baaki thi, angoor pakne baaki the
Bin mausam ke dekho aam aa gaya

Sab feeke pad gaye, ye darinde bhi kaap gaye
Inke ant ka jo paigaam aa gaya

Saare sheher me kohraam aa gaya
Jaane kaha se dekho raam aa gaya

Ye jo woh qatal kiye firte the dopahar me
Unki zindagi ka shaam aa gaya

Jo gardane kaati, jo laashe bichayi tumne
Yeh dekho iska anjaam aa gaya

Saare sheher me kohraam aa gaya
Jaane kaha se dekho raam aa gaya

Kitni maa soyi nahi hai parso se,aanchal se apne bacche ko ode
Un bholi si ankho ko aaraam aa gaya

Saare sheher me kohraam aa gaya
Jaane kaha se dekho raam aa gaya

Ae paap ke bhageedaro, chupte kyu ho, samne aao
khuda ke jaisa woh,karne kaam tamaam aa gaya

Saare sheher me kohraam aa gaya
Jaane kaha se dekho raam aa gaya

Jiske hath me bandhi hai raakhi laakho behno ki
Veer aisa dekho, sareaam aa gaya

Jiske maath me, maa ki mamta ka tilak hai
Samjho Tumhari maut ka intezaam aa gaya

Saare sheher me kohraam aa gaya
Jaane kaha se dekho raam aa gaya

Author's Note

For hindi readers!

Reviews

[Rimjhim]

Sardiya abhi baaki thi, angur pakne baaki the
Bin mausam ke dekho aam aa gya...!

These is my favourite part!!
Pura concept hi gazab tha, such will be the entry of "Ram"..!

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Wah wah. Bahut khoob, janaab. Kya khoob andaaz mei aapne apne jazbaaton ko alfaazon mei bayaan kiya hai. Shri Ram jaise koi yadi phir iss dharti par kadam rakhte hain, toh naakis logon ka khaatma tay hai. Kya baat hai. Likhte rahen,

[Lonely World (Varsha)]

Its awesome.. I liked it.

[Happy hours]

Thanks a lot... :)

[Riti Rajput]

Your poem reminded me of the shlok "Yada Yada Hi Dharmasya, Glanirva Bhavathi Bharatha, Abhyuthanam Adharmaysya, Tadatmanam Srijami Aham"
Your poem is lyrical too... I liked reading it... :)

[Happy hours]

thanks riti for this valuable review...i'm glad u liked it. :)