Good Better And The Best

We are always on a scale of something in someone's eyes

Good, Better And The Best

What are you?

Your every single gesture

deemed somewhere among the throng

So be vigil for the thing you're going to do

And if you don't care then listen to your heart

let others be a jurist

Good, Better And The best

Evaluate yourself though

in order to revamp

and to reach at acme

Fly up in the sky like a cuckoo bird

lighten up others, 

Spellbind them like a scented candles

Good, Better And the best

while you are up in the sky, people will throw stones at you

Pass a smile to them because 

you will be the best at that time for them

Reviews

[Riddhi]

Hey!!! That is really a nice poem and yes i agree with you to follow what one desires...keep on writing and thanks for sharing...

[Happy hours]

Thank you for the words... :)

[Confuser]

Hey, I loved it; follow your dreams; uplifting and the visual of "fly up in the sky like a cuckoo bird lighten up others, Spellbind them like a scented candles - I guess the flavor the scent is ours to choose. Bravo. Keep writing. Thank you.

[Happy hours]

thank you for the kind words...I'm glad u liked it... :)

[Confuser]

You are welcome.

[Jamestown]

Positive, reminder that you could provide help to someone, just by doing something
kind and simple, love the message, thx for sharing.

[Happy hours]

thank you very much....I'm glad you like my writing....keep reviewing :)

[rashu]

last four lines are just so beautiful tht i forgot what i read in beginning..
very beautiful write indeed..
and the title is really amazing " good better and the best "
keep it up:)

[Happy hours]

thanks rashu for the kind words... starting lines are people are there to judge in your every single moment...but you have to be you...

[rashu]

welcome dear:)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

I spclly luvd the last four lines!!!

[Happy hours]

I'm glad :) thanks for the kind words

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Truth!! Deep meanings!! Well done!!

[Happy hours]

Thank you for the valuable review