What If I say "I Love You"

attempt to write something on my condition in love

 

What if I say “I love you?”

Do you understand my tremor for you

I want to express everything in my heart right now

But you’re in front of me, how can I say a word

You know, I want to make this moment damn perfect for you

I want you to make believe in me, so that you can hold my hand forever

Yes, I accept my flaw; I didn't say how much I care for you

May be I'm fond of you and afraid of rebuff

Should I write a letter to you, because I'm aware of what a pen can do?

Or should I proposed to you right in front of you like a valiant person

This is my first time, I'm puzzled

Damn, give me a cue of what is going on your heart?

I know, I will broke down into bits, If you say “no”

No, I'm not going to take any risk, I better hide my feelings

but be there with me always because I love you

I really really do 

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Reviews

[Shabeeh Haider]

The fear, hope and anxiety is so much evident here. You cannot risk losing the person so you keep love bottled deep inside your heart. A very heartfelt poem

[Happy hours]

Thanks a lot for a valuable feedback/review :)

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

Thank you for stopping by and for your comments.

This one is very sweet and filled with great sentiment.

Keep up the good work.

Alisa

[Happy hours]

thank you for the kind words...

Regards,
Anshul

[Confuser]

Very nice writing - beautiful writing. Thank you so much! I thoroughly enjoyed it - Keep writing. Wow.

[Happy hours]

thank you for the kind review... :)

[Confuser]

You are welcome; guess four is lucky number now; so I'll say it once more: Great WRITING!

[Confuser]

You are welcome.

[Happy hours]

thank you once again... :P

[Confuser]

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[Confuser]

I re-read; congrats on your win!

[Anjana]

A really beautiful piece of literature !!! :D

[Happy hours]

thank you very much

[Cindy Marietta]

I really like the style you wrote this in, and the different stanzas. Great poem :)

[Happy hours]

thank you so much...:)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Oh Deah!! It was damn lovely and heart touching... really... amazing!!

[Happy hours]

Thank you for the kind words... :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Well written. Hope you get the direction soon. :)

[Happy hours]

it was something happened in my past..thanks for the review :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Oh okay! :)