I love writing

I love writing

A Poem by Happy hours
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I'm passionate for writing and here is the reason

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I'm fond of writing poetry , and you know why?
From my purest soul and my purest thy
I can convert a rowdy person into a shy
I can create the noble story of mine

With the genre of my poetry, I can make anyone smile
Not for too long may be for a while
I can write poem in different style
I can change all evil deed spreading in the mile

I can purge the weakness of a sole
I can mould it into any kind of role
By writing poetry, I can be a different person as a whole
I can be a soldier, I can be a mole

By writing poems, I may create a  incongruity
I can be enough to lighten up the whole city
Through my readers I can provide my character ,a pity
What can i do, my pen is so witty

© 2014 Happy hours


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You have done a good job of SHOWING instead of telling, the way a writer can create all kinds of different stories & feelings & scenarios. It's always good to use examples (as you have done), instead of writing in generalities. Your English is mostly well-written, with a few backward spots where tiny changes could improve the flow. First line, third stanza, I believe you mean "soul" (not "sole"). At times your rhymes feel like you chose your words more for the reason to get the rhymes, instead of focusing on the message to say it with power & feeling. Thank you for sharing your point of view about writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Happy hours

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the honest review. I will try to improve. Keep reviewing... :)
Aloha,

Thank you for sharing your talent with us out here. Keep up the good work.

Alisa

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

thank you very much for the valuable review... :)
a nice write bro. Much about poetry majesty.
I can purge the weakness of a sole
I can mould it into any kind of role
By writing poetry, I can be a different
person as a whole
I can be a soldier, I can be a mole
Those were my favourite lines. Keep it up.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

thank you very much friend for kind words :)
Firstly I would like to say this is an intellifent piece. Then as I believe writers have something in them that they can bring the change in this society. I liked it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

thank you very much...i'm glad you liked it... :)
We all write for different reasons...
You have captured the power of writing in your wonderful poem. A pleasure to read!

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

thank you ma'am for your kind words :)
very creative and it rhymed nicely. Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

thanks a ton scarlet :)
Fariha Tahseen Karim

9 Years Ago

my pleasure :)
Well penned. Keep writing and thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

thank you ma'am for your kind words :)
Gurleen Saluja

9 Years Ago

You're welcome.
what a lovely work..
every word you wrote connected me with this poem ...
it is so true that poetry has a power to bring a change or even change a person's perspective..
well done
keep it up

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

indeed...thank you ma'am for the valuable review :)

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Happy hours
Happy hours

Lucknow, Uttar Pradesh, India



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