After effect

just read it and let me know about it

He is gone

He became a enigma for all

Underneath the blue sky

People are screaming and wondering about the same

Aloft of the sky

He is resting in peace

Author's Note

a short poem by me. Please review it. thank you

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we may not have understood this person completely, but we felt his importance and scream in pain...

we still try to figure him out, even now...even now that he is resting in peace.

jacob

[Happy hours]

exactly....
thank you for the review :)
Regards,
Anshul

[Sindu]

Interesting! I feel it's liberating than just sad..

Note: [an] enigma

[Happy hours]

thank you :)

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

I wish to read more. Exquisitely written

[Happy hours]

thank you for your kind words...this is my first short poem... :)

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

my pleasure.

[Maglia Weaver Twill]

sad, recalls how many people can feel the same way about the same person, a strange happening of experience or our contact with the outside world or forces of the outside world maybe

[Happy hours]

very well said... :) thank you for the valuable review... :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Short and beautifully written. :-)

Kaze~

[Happy hours]

thank you for the valuable review :)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Eleanor]

Short but full of meaning. Strong and powerful writing!
Nice job :)

[Happy hours]

thanx a lot for the review

[Avanthika]

indeed short but powerful words , good work:)

[Happy hours]

thank you for the valuable review :)