silence wound

silence wound

A Poem by Happy hours
"

speak up...

"
He touched me here and there
I didn't said a word
He force me and give me thunder of pain
but I didn't oppose

I was too little too small
my hand was unable to give him offense
somewhere I was his partner in crime
I had to play mime

I gathered my tears, and 
told everyone the thing happened to me
I got a slap in return
I didn't say a word

© 2014 Happy hours


Author's Note

Happy hours
child molesting is a crime stop doing it

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Intense and Beautiful! Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

thank you very much for the review :)...
Wow, this is deep! I have heard so many stories like this...



Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words...I daily read one in the newspaper
The Black Warrior

10 Years Ago

really! Wow, that is devastating!
Such a great message through simple words. Child molesting is a big crime. Innocent souls being destroyed by devils. Different concept this is.
Very less write on such topics even if they are really important.
I liked this a lot. Though I think there are some grammatical mistake-
He *touched me here and there.
I didn't *say a word.

I was unable to *show him offence.
We cannot give anyone offence. Its supposed to be a feeling of defence.

And told everyone the thing *that happened to me.
Don't get discouraged. Everyone makes mistake and I do too.
I just thought about giving my opinion.
Great penning. :)



Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

I'm glad that you like it...and thank you for the correction ma'am...keep reviewing :)
Conveys the idea through simple words...gud...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

thank you for the valuable review

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Added on October 30, 2014
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Happy hours
Happy hours

Lucknow, Uttar Pradesh, India



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