silence wound

silence wound

A Poem by Happy hours
"

speak up...

"
He touched me here and there
I didn't said a word
He force me and give me thunder of pain
but I didn't oppose

I was too little too small
my hand was unable to give him offense
somewhere I was his partner in crime
I had to play mime

I gathered my tears, and 
told everyone the thing happened to me
I got a slap in return
I didn't say a word

© 2014 Happy hours


Author's Note

Happy hours
child molesting is a crime stop doing it

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Intense and Beautiful! Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

thank you very much for the review :)...
Wow, this is deep! I have heard so many stories like this...



Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words...I daily read one in the newspaper
The Black Warrior

9 Years Ago

really! Wow, that is devastating!
Such a great message through simple words. Child molesting is a big crime. Innocent souls being destroyed by devils. Different concept this is.
Very less write on such topics even if they are really important.
I liked this a lot. Though I think there are some grammatical mistake-
He *touched me here and there.
I didn't *say a word.

I was unable to *show him offence.
We cannot give anyone offence. Its supposed to be a feeling of defence.

And told everyone the thing *that happened to me.
Don't get discouraged. Everyone makes mistake and I do too.
I just thought about giving my opinion.
Great penning. :)



Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

I'm glad that you like it...and thank you for the correction ma'am...keep reviewing :)
Conveys the idea through simple words...gud...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

thank you for the valuable review

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Added on October 30, 2014
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Happy hours
Happy hours

Lucknow, Uttar Pradesh, India



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