ek muddat se

sorry for the Hindi poem again....I definitely write something else....these days are quiet busy for me

ek muddat se chehre me muskaan hai
ek muddat se sapno me udaan hai
jab se apne rukh liya zindagi me meri
usi muddat se humari bhi ek pehchaan hai

ek muddat se khusiya humari mehmaan hai
ek muddat se honsle me mere Jaan hai
mukhtsar si mulaakaat jabse hui hai apse
tabse hum bhi Shama mehfil ki shaan hai

ek muddat se mausam suhana lagta hai
ek muddat se rishta apse purana lagta hai
har din deedar ki khawaish hoti hai namaz me
apke bina har din begana lagta hai

ek muddat se chand pyaara lagta hai
ek muddat se ye dil awara lagta hai
yuhi bas sath rahe hum tum
bin there har pal gawara lagta hai

ek muddat se duniya ke rang dikhte hai
ek muddat se jeene ke dhang dikhte hai
yuh dekh kar jalte hai log
sabke chehre Hume dang dikhte hai

Reviews

[Anahat]

Waoo..Straight away going to my favourites! What a lovely write!
Its better than the ones you write in English! No offence but yeah just my my opinion! hehe.. :)

[Happy hours]

thank you for the honest and valuable review...I'm glad that you liked it....and usually I write poems in Hindi only...but I'm trying to write in English as well....thanks a lot... :)

[Anahat]

hehe yes the flow shows your faute is hindi! Keep writing :)

[Happy hours]

:) thank you for the inspiration :) keep reviewing my work...

[Anahat]

sure! you too :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

nice read, good job, keep it up

[Happy hours]

thank you very much for the review... :)

[ayesha gupta]

wow.. bahut achi hai poem. hehe. a hindi review. aapne bahut acha likha hai..direct heart tak gya. keep writing. and ya..you shouldnt be sorry about writing in hindi. this poem is awesome.

[Happy hours]

thank you very much dear friend :)

[Prabha Salimath]

Nice one Anshul keep writing in hindi too.

[Happy hours]

thank you so much :)

[Prabha Salimath]

welcome.....