Another beautiful world

thank you gurleen for the kind help

Vague specimen of federation

I witnessed in parallel world

The world full of extroverts

having genus of dilligent species

They are meant to be together as a cadre

moving in a continuous virgule

I hope the worlds of ants is

far more better than us

They might have a news channel of their own

discussing all the time about their biggest foe, us,

They too might have a big wedding ceremony

where blushing bride came to dias in white fairy gown

and other enjoying with the red wine having fun

They might have their government

and a state without corruption

I can guaranteed there be no rape

no ableism, a peaceful heaven it would be

Population out there might respect others

and it would be best if they might not cleave themselves

with caste and creed as a parameter

They might follow the line "GOD is one"

and stuck with the jolly life ever and forever

 

So different would be there world,

where they would enact as one

Unlike humans,

They would unite in sorrows and

even during fun.

 

Author's Note

reviews are welcomed

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

World of ants?? I like the idea of a new workd but ants?? It raised some questions in my mind. May be its just me.But ants are a species with no emotions even though it is referred to in the bible"they are the hard-working of all the species".. but they are void of emotions.Still the paradoxes are appealing..The concept of an utopian theme is good..Keep writing :)
~Sophy

[Happy hours]

well i agree but let say if they have emotions, it would be in the purest form without any selfishness...what i want in this world...i narrate it in the other way....thanks for the valuable review :)