side by side

side by side

A Poem by Happy hours
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Be unite...stand together

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Uniform persons with dynamic souls
Clashing perspective as a whole
Sometimes human and sometimes afreet
thinking poles apart in the same street

Some are climbing up and some are crawling
They all are in bout with special something
They change too fast they remains the same
Sometimes they're proud and sometimes they're shame

Selfish goals, they're trying to achieve
They're simple but complex to perceive
Their mind are narrow but sometime its wide
When they're standing side by side

© 2014 Happy hours


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Happy hours
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"Walk with the kings and still not lose the hold of common touch".. a very nice concept. A bit of grammatical error-they change too fast,they remain the same- "they is plural so verb should also be plural". Glad to see you are improving. ;) ★wishes and love★

~Sophy

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

thanks for the valuable review...i'll keep those little thing in mind... thanks a ton ma'am :)
Sophy Freebirds

10 Years Ago

You're welcome muchly. ;)
Unity is a great strength. Everyone should understand this.
Nicely written ..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

thanks ayushi for the review :)
Nice, revealed how different minds work well when they unite...
Liked it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

i'm glad u liked it...thanks for the review
Prabha Salimath

10 Years Ago

You are welcome Anshul...
This poem shows how people can be so different yet mingle with people of contrasting characters....beautifully explained... :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

thank you for the review :)
priya

10 Years Ago

my pleasure....
Nice write.. Gearing up.. Hope to see more soon :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

Inshaallah zaroor.....thanks for the review :)

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Happy hours
Happy hours

Lucknow, Uttar Pradesh, India



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