catch me if you can

Nothing is impossible

Catch me if you can
Right in front of you, on the denouement of your catastrophe
I'm waiting for you, unfurl my hands and heart
Looking forward to shoulder your unmeasurable pain
Catch me if you can

You walk slowly or crawl on the hard unbending ground
Doesn't matter atleast you're trying
Don't take over yourself with the lame pretext of luck
I'm right there, see me
And catch me if you can

If you found yourself off_track
Then you're in the road of success
Let bygones be bygones and move ahead
As I'm right there, don't turn away
And catch me if you can

Author's Note

Need reviews

Reviews

[Anahat]

What a brilliant piece of work! Powerful Message! Keep up the good work! :)

[Happy hours]

thank you anahat for your kind words :)

[Anahat]

Pleasure's all mine :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was an interesting poem. I enjoyed the read though. Thank you for sharing.

[Happy hours]

thank a ton :)

[Prabha Salimath]

Impossible = I'm possible.....

[Happy hours]

Exactly thank you for the review

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome...

[Sophy Freebirds]

A very inspiring piece of work.... the poem has a brilliant phrases which tend to boost up the soul...the first line of the second stanza "you walk" a correction.. although there are some syntactic errors they are overlooked because of the powerful message of the poem.. Move ahead no matter what,fight your battles it may be your last.. love the fighting instinct in this poem .Just my cup of tea ;)

~Sophy

[Happy hours]

thanks a ton for reviewing it,... :)

[Chaselyn]

There are definitely a couple typos and grammatical errors but they could be easily fixed and corrected with just a quick edit... Ignoring those, what a brilliant poem! Certain phrases hold such impact such as, "unfurl my hands and heart, denouement of catastrophe, and don't take over yourself with the lame pretext of luck." I like the idea of your heart shouldering their pain and how they MUST exercise volition to make this work.

[Happy hours]

thank you mam for the valuable review....I'm glad you liked it... :)

[Leigh]

I like the repeat of the line 'catch me if you can' I think that works well and gives this poem a song like quality. The theme is tender and full of hope and the emotions pour out, I enjoyed this read.

[Happy hours]

thank you leigh for the valuable review.... :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

A good write.. Nicely penned. Would like to bring to light a little mistake.. It should have been immeasurable.. Instead of unmeasurable.. Rest all is good :)

[Happy hours]

Thank u gurleen for valuable review glad u liked it

[Gurleen Saluja]

You are welcome :)