pure bonds

pure bonds

A Poem by Happy hours
"

some bonds and their roles

"
bond with friends-I am too young to understand
the value of friendship
I though appreciate the bond between me and my friends
I too can write bulky words
but nothing can define these pure bonds

bond with parents-I share my feelings with them
I love them because they are caring
motivate me and support me when I fall
these are my parents my family
I want to say a lot
but nothing can define these pure bonds

bond with mind-I narrate my life with the help of my mind
the only reason behind the right direction I choose
warn me when multiple situations come in front of me
save me from the melo-drama and double faced

characters
I want to express a lot
but nothing can define these pure bonds

bond with society- teach me a lot through the entire life of mine
how to become fake and how to help others
a rope tie around me and teach me how I can be in my limits
define my ability and future
I can reveal it a lot
but nothing can define these pure bonds

bonds with god- inculcate fear in me
giving me the freedom and happiness
he provide me a source so that i can make these bonds
also show me the circumstances time to time
and give me the energy to deal with it
I can feel it a lot
but nothing can define these pure bonds

© 2014 Happy hours


Author's Note

Happy hours
please correct me so that I can improve

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A good write.. Expresses well the relation with friends, family, society and so.. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

thank dear for the valuable review
Gurleen Saluja

10 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Firstly "multiple situations COME infront of me.. secondly DOUBLE FACED CHARACTERS"
Thirdly "teaches,inculcatesand provides.. You need to work on your grammar.. although its an insightful poem.

~Sophy


Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

I knew it....thank for the correction..thnx for the valuable review
Sophy Freebirds

10 Years Ago

De nada :)

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Happy hours

Lucknow, Uttar Pradesh, India



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Life is beautiful when 24 hours of a day are happy hours Kindly stop by as i need your reviews and comments Apart from that I love nature and its miracle. I'm passionate for writing, Because whe.. more..

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