I hate you

                                                                

I hate you, Love

 Every time you betrayed me

There is no happiness now

as you stole it away

I hate you, love

For me you left unbearable pain

but I'm so smart

I made you fool by smile

all the time without any reason

and in every season

I hate you, love

Reviews

[ASHIDASH]

Hatred and Love. Both together have given your poem a stern identity on the theme of betrayal.

[Happy hours]

thanx a lot...glad u liked it

[deepika]

BETRAYAL- a big emotion, yet you have depicted it so simply and beautifully that it touches the heart..

[Happy hours]

thank you very much for reading :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Contradictory words used beautifully..a good write :)

[Happy hours]

thanks gurleen for the valuabe review... :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

You're welcome :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Betrayal is a b***h... but get over it.. ignore the pain.. and let go the grudges.. ;)

~Sophy

[Happy hours]

yeah u r rite...thanks for the review... :)