confused

I'm literally confused

Where to go

which path to choose

I'm so confused

 

I dont know what are the things that I really enjoy from my heart

I dont know what are the field where I can work hard

I want to simplify the glourious life of mine

I want to clear my don'ts and do's

I'm so confused

 

I write so many time but everytime I undo my writing

Cause I'm not sure whether my feelings purely expressed or not

here the time is moving,I know it's wait for none

I have to do something and stop it doing until is done

I think I'm screwed

I'm so confused

 

But what I need is joy and smile

In this long journey for a while

I've been tried so hard to out case my problems

But how, cause It's difficults for me to find out solutions

I'm so confused

Reviews

[Prabha Salimath]

Yes of course after graduation when there is no aim what to do with life we'll get confused in choosing a path to move on.
Then the next path will be decided considering availability & parents support..
Whatever it's be the most important is trust in ourself & our potentiality, but it should taken care that trust with second thoughts always ruins the whole stuff.

[Happy hours]

very well said...thanx for the valuable review

[Prabha Salimath]

You're welcome.....

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Really thoughtful and nice poem! I like the simple style and your lines..also the blue color. It also expresses one condition, I`m so often in! confusion...doubt, wondering which way to go, this is maybe a part of poetic soul. This confusion finally is useful, because may lead you to the right way! My favorite lines:
here the time is moving,I know it's wait for none
I have to do something and stop it doing until is done

{sugar plum}

[Happy hours]

thank you sugar for sweet review :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Well expressed feelings.. Simple and good.

[Happy hours]

thanks gurleen... your review is valuable for me... :)