Letter to mom

Letter to mom

A Poem by Happy hours

Hey mom
I wrote you a letter
No words can define my love to you
I'm a boy, I supposed to be rigid
So Mom
I wrote you a letter

I'm only 22, everyone told me I'm too young
Not supposed to use big words
For you I always be the sweet innocent child
So mom
I wrote you a letter

I can feel GOD in you
You made me the man of value
I'm always right in your eyes
I'm the best for you
So mom
I wrote you a letter

I know you are watching me, caring for me somehow
I know you support me whenever I fall down
You always want me to be happy
So mom
I wrote you a letter

I know I'm very far away from you
And you are crying for me 
But if you want me not to be worried
You have to vanish  your pain away

Last time a saw, my graveyard wet with tears
and that was you who cried upon it whole night
Mom I can't sleep until you will be free from that much pain
I know after reading this you don't want me to worry
So mom
I wrote you a letter

I'm with you, feel me in the air
I'm in every corner and everywhere
I want to be with you
I beg you to smile
So mom
I wrote you a letter

© 2014 Happy hours


Author's Note

Happy hours
Please read it and love your mother

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I just loved it Anshul, not because its about mom but it consist the truth of a boy. As I see my little brother, sometimes he pretends rude, indeed gw doesn't mean to. You explained her caring nature and filling in her courage to face the situation. Asking her to envision you happy while you are away its just simply superb.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

thank you very much ma'am for your kind words :)
Hey I am 22.. and kids seem to use bigger words now-a-days.. haha
That's very sweet and cute and little sad.... yup mother's are awesome .. superheroes in a saree :)
Made me want to write my mom a letter

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

:D thanks for the valuable review...
Sindu

10 Years Ago

sure :)...
A little correction"caring for me somehow".. or else it is a very touchy poem..

~Sophy

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

thanks sophy for the kind words
Lovely.. I like how you always choose such precious topics to write about :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

I love writing...so ideas are time to time pop up in my mind.....I m glad u liked it
It's a really good composition.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Happy hours

10 Years Ago

I'm glad you like it...thank you very much

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Added on June 3, 2014
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Happy hours
Happy hours

Lucknow, Uttar Pradesh, India



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