Morning

Morning

A Poem by Happy hours

In morning I woke up late 
I love the power of my dreams
dreams, weird though
Take you down to your fate

There is a place in my dreams in sepia mode
there is a clean and long empty road
I can see my goal from one side of it
all I need is to walk through it

Surprisingly, I enjoy in my dreams
there is no fear no boundaries
No time and no pressure
Now I can achieve it for sure

I'm independent in my dream
the main hero of the film
There is no grave
I'm master in my own not a slave

Smile on my face
I'm the only in my race
I can even crawl for my success
But I have to achieve it, I guess

No one is there for comparison
no one is there in the competition
In my dreams, I live up for myself
In my dreams, I don't need any help

I'm happy that is enough for me
I can fly in the blue sky
no one is there to stop me
in dreams, I do not hesitate
Its good to be woke up late 

© 2014 Happy hours


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Happy hours
Power of the dreams, Undefined

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Had this dream taken at day time the circumstances would have been so reverend and you would have not to crawl for your success.Rest is a fine try in rhyming pattern...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

thank you sir for the valuable review :)
M.A.Rathore

9 Years Ago

My pleasure
Fun poem.. yup dreams are like adventure land and that too in sepia mode :D .. nice one!

just a little something
[No] one is there for comparison
Its good to be woke up late : Its good to be up late [OR] Its good to [wake] up late
Other than that it's cool

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

thank you sindu for the correction :)
Sindu

9 Years Ago

you're welcome..
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Anshul, yours is a beautiful kinda dreaming, rhyming poem... I liked the put up powerful words are in each stanza... well done (y)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot for the review...keep reviewing... :)
i liked it. thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

thank you friend for your kind words

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Lucknow, Uttar Pradesh, India



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