I'm Strong

I'm Strong

A Poem by Happy hours
"

you are strong

"
No you are not weak
you are following hierarchy
let everyone shout and scream
but you are not weak

You are two steps ahead of us
We exist, you're the reason
come on, you can do everything
you are strong, you are weapon

You are the girl, always strong
You are the family, the mother
if anyone raise voice against you
don't be quiet but fight

You don't need any sympathy, do you?
you can fly like a free birds, up in the air
I heard story about your bravery everywhere
You are incomparable

I know you are bounded with society's rope
but one day you don't care about these, I hope
I just want you to answer them
Tell them what you can do
Don't let them decide 

nobody can stop you, whatever they say
they're wrong
You are the lady
and you are strong

© 2014 Happy hours


Author's Note

Happy hours
ignore grammatical errors, and comment please

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Anshul its just an honour for a girl, lady or woman. I really loved it read twice there no any stop good flow a very catchy piece of writing. Thank you so much for sharing.
Yes we don't need strength to do whatever we wish, still we keep quite not we are helpless but we love peace. Although women need to raise her voice when is needed that my plead.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Happy hours

9 Years Ago

yes, you are right...Thank you for the kind review :)
Truly inspiring.
"You don't need any sympathy, do you?" -- this line was outstanding.
The subject was hidden in the center of the poem(3 para #Literally) moral being "Women are powerful"

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

yes deepika woman are powerful...they don't need any special utilities attention and even reservatio.. read more
An inspirational piece! Very nice Anshul.. It has a warm tone voicing, giving strenght. Women have a strenght superior to any :)

you are strong, you are weapon

you can fly like a free bird, up in the air
I heard story about your bravery everywhere

I know you are bounded with society's rope
but one day you don't care about these, I hope

Love those lines..



Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

thank you sindu for your kind words :)
Sindu

10 Years Ago

welcome.. :)
We are not just woman we are storm in skin ;) Bravado...
Nice piece.

~Sophy

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

yes you are.... thank you for the review... :)
Sophy Freebirds

10 Years Ago

Anytime ;)
Excellently written. Describing effectively the role of women in the society.. Loved reading it.. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

thanks for your time and review
Gurleen Saluja

10 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
I liked you dedication to women empowerment..
Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

thanks ayushi
I find this an incredible feminist piece, I can only wish I'd have the pleasure or reading more socially relevant themes like this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your valuable review :)
empowering. I really like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Happy hours

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)

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Lucknow, Uttar Pradesh, India



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