Left without Goodbye

Left without Goodbye

A Poem by Blessing In Disguise

So she left without a goodbye
And didn’t come back for his “why???”
What would have been her reason?
Why did she leave in the cloudburst season?
It kept drizzling heavily within her heart
But maintaining a smile was her beautiful art
Her smile made the sun shine brightly
Within her wrecked heart the rain poured politely
She kept waiting for her friend
But he never came, she waited till the end
Now I don’t know where she has gone
Maybe lost in the darkness of dawn
Since all your concern for her was a lie
Maybe that’s why she left without a goodbye

© 2015 Blessing In Disguise


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This is a beautiful poem, with a powerful ending. I love it. Rating 100# and adding to my favorites. I really wanna see more of your poetry.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Blessing In Disguise

9 Years Ago

:)
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Lol :) :)
I can feel it all, too good seriously.
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Blessing In Disguise

9 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it :D
Shah Sabia

9 Years Ago

I am glad you are glad because of me :p
a sad write,she left without a goodbye

check the 4 th line for left

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blessing In Disguise

9 Years Ago


Blessing In Disguise
Thank you so much wordman :) i did the corrections
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you`re welcome

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Added on July 27, 2015
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Jammu and kashmir, Srinagar , India



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