Blue Romance

Let's mimic the image we saw on the big screen 

Sandy toes on the ocean shore 

That perfect corny love scene 

This kiss, pure bliss 

From you I've been deprived 

Your gentle touch I've missed 

Gods of the sea adore the romance 

The waves sing our song

Love prolonged 

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Oh we all have a weakness for the corny love scene, just some of us are too cool to admit it. I liked this.

[Dr. Wood ?]

well you certainly write beyond your years...This is pretty good stuff

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sappy and romantic is good...

these scenes in movies always make me emotional...nice when real life can be this way, so why not.

love it.

[Alanna Nox]

Thank you! :)

[zainul]

So sweet lines of love and romance.
I congratulate you, promising poet!

[Alanna Nox]

Thanks, I appreciate it!

[zainul]

You are most welcome,sweet girl.

[Justsimplyjulia]

Awwwwwwwww I loved this. Excellent poem, I absolutely LOVED it. And I know how it feels to be a young writer with high hopes of having others enjoy your work! And I did!!!! GREAT JOB!
-Dragonheart

[Alanna Nox]

Thank you very much! Glad you liked it! :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Creative in the liens of this...and I have to say for your age...you took a clip of a movie(s) and transformed them in the lines of a poem...

[Alanna Nox]

Thank you!! :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...I see I misspelled "lines" wrong...sorry about that...

[William J. Marsh]

Very nice Alanna. Truly a story fit for the big screen. It is short and sweet but reads like a novel.

[Alanna Nox]

Thanks so much! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Very romantic...and mature belying your age! I liked it. lydi**

[Alanna Nox]

Thank you very much! :)