You left me crying in the rain..

Im no poet .nothing at all i just wanted to write something i felt from the heart..

Now you are having fun with some other chick
And i'm thinking about you like a thick .

i wish if i can do anything for us to make it through
But i guess you don't want me to.

You left me crying in the rain
how could you make me feel such a pain .

talking with you for a while
Could literally make me smile.

You left me crying in the rain
How could you make me feel such a pain.

I wish if i can undo that i hurt you
And erase every bad thing we went through.

And if you promise me that you will love me back
That probabbly could give me a heart attack .

You left me crying in the rain
How could you make me feel such a pain.


Cause everytime i'm with you
I feel like i'm breathing you .

But despite this

You left me crying in the rain
How? How could you make me feel such a pain?

Author's Note

Plz tell me how u think about it i know its not good enough but help me with ur point of views to try writing better and better . Thnx :)
Ps : i accept critics