A Snapshot - Dream Fragment

A Snapshot - Dream Fragment

A Poem by N. N. Grainger

I swear she’s just a child, yet she holds my head in her hands.

Grasps me like a haphazard rock atop a traffic cone.

And like a bandy Goliath

She tests my lips like cold waters on toes.

Trying for the first time the likes of my hulking frame.

And she purses her lips and tastes what’s been done.

I can only be still for her, searching her

If she needs me, I’m here for her

For the decision of a mistake or a realisation.

Yet how can she be a child, she holds my head in her hands.

© 2011 N. N. Grainger


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I tried to find that 'one line' that captured me the most, but honestly, it's every line in this too short piece....every single line is a poem in and of itself. Very well done. Wish I'd written it, but I'm so glad you did. Thanks for sharing!

(PS: Realization is spelled with a Z.)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


Such a lovely thought to be there for someone. Well done. Keep on penning.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

399 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on June 23, 2011
Last Updated on July 1, 2011
Previous Versions

Author

N. N. Grainger
N. N. Grainger

Guisborough, Teesside, United Kingdom



About
Hello I'm Natalie :) I've been writing on and off now for about four or five years. I am currently studying English at advanced level and am soon to pursue a degree which I hope will involve some for.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


~ True Love ~ ~ True Love ~

A Poem by Legacy