Kiss

another oldie. six years old. :)

Nearing again now

Breath tasted with open mouths

Lips touch one more time

Reviews

[LuvFlyer Creations]

very nice poem! I liked it a lot. keep up the great work! it might just be me but i personally felt like the ending was a symbol of death. Which I am not 100% sure it is supposed to be read like that. If it is then that's amazing! If not might want to change it a bit so it does not feel like its the final kiss.

[Aria]

thanks for reading!

[The Analog Kid]

Very sensual 5-7-5.