Whisper

 

 

Why do you fall to your knees

Crashing into all that you've run from

All that you've died for

Why do you fall

 

Stay still now and I might reach you

Don't say a word, not one whisper

Feel the earth beneath you move

Shaking for what we've done

 

Why do you fall to your knees

Down to where they want you

Where they can reach you

Why do you fall

 

Stay still now and I might reach you

Don't say my name, not one whisper

Make the earth beneath them move

Shaking for what they've done

 

Break their bodies as they broke ours

Make them cry for all you've run from

Break their hearts as they broke ours

Make them scream for all you've died for

 

Walk to me as they fall to their knees

Crashing into all that we've run from

All that we've died for

Walk to me as they fall

 

 

 

 

 

 

Copyright ©2008 Anorin Arssinous

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A thought provoking and casted piece, well done, good read.





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[Lyra H]

Absolutely beautiful and very powerful imagery here...

[Laura E. Aranda]

I love the mix and twisting of words in this one. Great write! I will have to reread it sometime..again. Good luck in the contest! Cheers,lea

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

very powerful poetry.. a wonderful expression of revenge perhaps?
i enjoyed this poem ..

Chloe
xoxo

[Adela Muresan]

I like this very deep poetic way of expressing a powerful will to ,,stand up,,.
The euphony is great.

Nice work.

A.M.

[R. L. Ambar]

Wow, powerful in more then one way. Alot of good words used.


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