Whisper

 

 

Why do you fall to your knees

Crashing into all that you've run from

All that you've died for

Why do you fall

 

Stay still now and I might reach you

Don't say a word, not one whisper

Feel the earth beneath you move

Shaking for what we've done

 

Why do you fall to your knees

Down to where they want you

Where they can reach you

Why do you fall

 

Stay still now and I might reach you

Don't say my name, not one whisper

Make the earth beneath them move

Shaking for what they've done

 

Break their bodies as they broke ours

Make them cry for all you've run from

Break their hearts as they broke ours

Make them scream for all you've died for

 

Walk to me as they fall to their knees

Crashing into all that we've run from

All that we've died for

Walk to me as they fall

 

 

 

 

 

 

Copyright ©2008 Anorin Arssinous

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A thought provoking and casted piece, well done, good read.





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[Aria]

thanks everyone

[Just Brooke]

Wow very interesting, it's thought provoking and is extremely powerful. Beautifully written.

[Emily B]

your words are strong and powerful . . . a wonderful piece to read

[Kelley]

That was a really cool poem Anorin! I enjoyed reading it and it kind of reminded me of a dream a person would have thinking they were dead.
Anyway great write! Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[fallendemonofmercy]

a sort of reminder of war and the cruel and provacative ways that lovers are torn apart
if one falls, both are jeperdized

[Fallen_Immortal]

This is gorgeous. I know, I say that about a lot of your writing, but this moved me incredibly. Parts of it are so incredibly heartfelt, even for me. I love it. It also reminded me a little of Providence and Devi wanting Vincent to always be there, kind of, but maybe I'm off with that. Either way, I love it.

[Elizabeth Thief]

Wow, this is amazing. I agree, this would be an awesome song. It's full of raw emotion and energy. Great write!!!!!

[InkBlack]

I have one question...
Is this supposed to be song or a poem? I'm just wondering because the stanza's the same every other one.
If its not a song, you should make it a song. That would be really great because it's kind of repetitive to be a poem.

All and all, it's very good and I enjoyed reading it.

[Last Lying Look]

Wow. This is magnificent!
So powerful and ... perfect.
I really love this piece. For some reason I really connected with it.
This poem is such a beauty.
I'm adding it to my favorites for sure.
I'm so glad I stumbled across this.

-Elissa :)