As you die

Breathe all this noise in
Feel it pound inside your heart
Now take a drink of my poison
Lay back and watch it start

Hear me sigh in your ear
Taste your sweat as you shake
Sing a prayer to rid the fear
Pray for the fever to break

Breathe all this noise in
Feel it break your heart
Now take a drink of your poison
Lay back and watch it start

Hear me smile as you fall here
Kissing your lips through your ache
Sing your prayer my dear
Pray for Him your soul to take

Breathe all this noise in
Feel it pound inside your lie
Now take a drink of our poison
Lay back and watch...



Copyright ©2008 Anorin Arssinous

 

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

I can'tg start to describe the way that your poem made me feel . It tasted a little like bitter sweet revenge. So many times the object of our affection takes advantage of a loving heart only to walk away unscathed. Your poem describes the wishful outcome to betrayal that many a broken heart has wished. Thank you for such a powerful and creative masterpiece.

Mr. Lopez

[Adela Muresan]

:)) I can feel the pleasure of revange while reading this.
It's very nicely penned; I liked it.

A.M.