Guide Me

Meh, just came to me, screaming at me saying "Type me up! Type me up!"

a kiss on the soul

leads to a caress of the spirit

touch gently the heart

then pull it out leaving me lifeless

 

wrap me in lies

protect me from you

from the desires i have

and the guilt i live with

 

treat me with respect

due only to a slave

hold me and tell me

i am yours forever

 

make me feel special

make me feel loved

i promise you the world

i promise you myself

 

all i have is yours

and all i want is you

yet something gets between us

the darkness prevails

 

on and on she tries

dragging me into insanity

helpless at her touch

you guide me to your heart

Reviews

[Unique_ Renee]

Ok this totally feeled with sexual energy that needs to be released and i love it! May not be your genre but i like how you have created a mixture of feelings that put the reader into that poem! I so wonder who the mysterios lover could be ^o)

[James Takeo Panton]

this piece reads well, flows nicely, and looks good.....it is heartfelt and honest.....i can understand why something inside you screamed to be typed.......

[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

you're nothing short of a genius shadow. That was beautifully written and emotional. Very heartfelt and real.
Great job.

[Brandon Taylor-Black]

I'm glad you listened to ii.
A wonderful, passionate piece.
'All I have is yours
You are all I want'....such powerful lines, that actually become the embodiement of this whole piece.
Bravo Shadow.
A wonderful write.