It's nice to see a poem that reflects the reality of finding a new love.The uncertainty, and hope that the leap of faith taken was not in vain. Fighting the memories from one's past that plant seeds of doubt in the mind. It's easy to put on rose-tinted glasses at the start of a new relationship, but this piece reflects the fear of the unknown and the hope that fuels us to search for a meaningful, lasting relationship.
A song I hear as one of my fave and it's got a lyric like, I don't care how many tears you cry...don't get another second time...we just gotta say Goodbye...
I know this poem is totally your spell and it went through my mind like heavy wind full of warm questions....
May this one gets it's apt answer one day or may already got...thanks for sharing....indeed twas a great read☺
It's nice to see a poem that reflects the reality of finding a new love.The uncertainty, and hope that the leap of faith taken was not in vain. Fighting the memories from one's past that plant seeds of doubt in the mind. It's easy to put on rose-tinted glasses at the start of a new relationship, but this piece reflects the fear of the unknown and the hope that fuels us to search for a meaningful, lasting relationship.
True > That's Life - as they say
Then one day when you don't expect you find a friend who sticks by you - Off you go to meet the world together - Let others join us and flutter away know you will be constant by me
This is one of the most uplifting & realistic messages I've read about any kind of heartbreak theme. So many times such messages sound too whiny or too much like a pep talk, for my liking. But in this case, you touch on the painful parts with plenty of authentic questioning, while also giving ample time to turn to a more positive direction to finish your message. There will always be painful chapters but we can't let them define us. You've delivered this by showing instead of telling (first rule of good writing) . . . Fondly, Margie
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
aw thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. I agree, the whiny poetry isn't my cup of tea either, i .. read moreaw thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. I agree, the whiny poetry isn't my cup of tea either, i wanted to try write something a bit different. :)
My name is Joe I am 32 years old from England. Besides photography, my other passion is writing novels, I enjoy expressing myself through poetry and stories.
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