Green;

Tree's, bushes, too much green

crickets, critters crawl around

a flurry of noises

but too little sound

 

all this green

is a suffocating plastic bag

I want to be free

it's making my brain zig-zag

 

Reviews

[Stephen]

Great poem! I loved the imagery in the first stanza.

[Brandi Espy]

Short && sweet, like it. (:

[Paul B. Spence]

Short but nice.

I really liked this part
'a flurry of noises
but too little sound'

very nice imagery

[WhoIsAmelia?]

well done! it says so much with so few words. Even in an open area, one can still feel closed in, even if just by an overwhelming amount of colour :)

[CharlesMonroe]

I like this, short but sweet. It's good (:

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Clever my friend.