Lost Among the Fairytales:

Just some feelings...

You make me feel insane

Both good and bad

You make me so happy

But oh you make me so f*****g mad

Or… wait, so f*****g sad too

 

You treat me like a princess

Then like the toad

I feel like Cinderella at the ball

Then like Repunzel stuck in the tower

But you arent coming to beg me

To let down my long hair

I’m just stuck up here waiting

How is that fair?

 

I go between

Being the best thing

In the world

To being totally

And completely ignored

And back and forth

Back and forth

 

I just want to be okay

Yeah, I’m a drama queen

It’s only ‘cause I care

I love you so much

I can’t even find the words to say

Just tell me you’re okay

That’s all you’ve got to say

Author's Note

I don't even know what this is honestly. I tried to make my feelings into a poem. But, my feelings are so jumbled up, that so is the poem. Half the time I was trying to rhyme, and then when I did, I rhymed the same words. The other half I was just trying to get my feelings down. So here ya go, shitty feelings---shitty poem. Enjoy

Reviews

[fargone]

lol, NOT a s****y poem. if ur feelings are jumbled, there is nothing wrong with a "jumbled" poem to express them. in fact, it's essential, in my view at least. it's a GOOD poem.

[Millie]

This is amazing it shows real depth to your work.
I love the emotion that's in this poem.
I can relate to how you're feeling in this poem