A Divide Within The Cards

The Ocean Speaks In Its Silence

Where Have I Died

Somewhere In My Mind

Beneath These Haunted Skies

I Fall Beneath A Tombstone

The One In Disguise

It Locks Away My Screams

Along With My Pride

I Search For An Escape

A Divide Within The Cards

A Break Within The Window

Wait For The Show

It Begins When You Are Fake

Are You Sure You Are Ready For This Final Mistake?

I Can See Through Your Smile

Loudly Promising Warmth Unwanted

Trying To Arrest The Innocent Hands

Binding Them With Hatred

Closing Away The Beautiful Eyes

I Wish You Could See Them...

And So Do I

 

 

 

Reviews

[Silent Pacer]

Very very inspiring. You strumbed an tender nerve of mine. I have had to deal with fakes all day, and it makes one wonder if others see you as you see them... very inspirational... I like how you start out one way, and end in a completely different... and yet you do the transitions seemlessly... nicely done.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

This is powerful... Your words are well expressed and I loved the imagery with the cards.... The flow was good but i think it could be improved but I'm the worst person to talk to about flow lol... Good job!

[The Autumn Faerie]

This is...
A very powerful piece...

Excellent imagery, too.