Dark Roses

They Smile In The Wind

And They Shiver In The Night

You Set Them Silently In The Moonlight

Shining Ever So Vaguely

The Page Has Been Forgotten

The Secret Fortold

With Sky's So Dark

With Pain So Sharp

Where Must We Set These Roses In This Dark

The Pond Is Silent

And The Lake Is Fierce

Where Is This Land We Spoke Of So Clear

We Search For The Tomb

Only To Find It In Ruin

All Withered In The Rain

How Must I Stay In Vain

I Walk Along This Shadow

Wherever It May Lead

Whoever I Shall Find There

It Will Probly Make Me Bleed

Am I Yet Free?

 

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

This was an excellent piece with lots of deep meaning for me. Everywhere we turn seeking safey we find the memories of our past gone to dust. So we trudge on hoping one day to find that sared place to let our heart once again burst forth as if in spring and feel the freedom in offers us.

A magnificant write! Truly enjoyable to read and ponder over!

Infinity's Shadow

[Annalisa]

This was lovely. It has a smooth and alluring rhythm and there was a lot behind the words. It was the kind of poem that you could read and just enjoy the sound, or look deeply into for a meaning which makes it something that almost anyone would enjoy which is difficult... great job.

[Silent Pacer]

very well worded, your vocabilary placing is very amusing, and different they what I normally see, thus setting it apart from the mundain. Very nicely depicted also, I could picture all you wrote, like a picture book in my mind... very nicely worded..

[An owl on the moon]

The lyrical quality of your words is masterful, moving us through the darkness and depths to a soul filled with pain and loss... Seems it could be a part of a bigger saga... Wonderfully vivid!

[Asha Raphael]

i really loved it . . . it's so wonderful . . really amazing!

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

Wow this is really good... It flowed very well and it just seemed perfect... I wouldn't change a thing... part of me was thinking of vampires while i was reading this... but thats cause i'm weird like that... This really was good... Great Job!! Emotions were expressed, flowed perfectly.... and your imagery was amazing... GREAT JOB!