Broken Dreams

The Dream Has Been Shattered

Along With Your Heart

You Rapture The Thoughts

Yet They Leave You Behind

A Broken Tune

A Twisted Frame

The Forgotten Page

Breathe The New Failure

For You Have Suffocated

Within A Mirror

Of Your Own Mind

Search For The Door

Lose The Key To Your Sanity

For It Has Lost You

The Structure Collapsed

The Fortune Broken

Fixing Your Place

Into The Black Book

Of Your Own Broken Dreams

 

 

Reviews

[Alex McFadyen]

Its very nicely written. I think, however, you should read the poem outloud to yourself and think about how you can improve the flow. Good job, though!