Fate

The Gates Of Fate Have Opened For You

As You Decay Away Into Your Final Moments

Shadowed And Lost

Within A Realm Where Only You Can Decide Your Tradegy

Falling Into Your Wings

You Fly Away From Yourself

Screaming All Of Your Fears

Bleeding With Tears

While The Eye Of Fate Turns His Back On You

As The Clock Shaves His Minutes

And Wipes His Laughter Into Your Soul

Falling Into The Impossible

You Await The Dawn

To Burn You Away From Your Own Hell

 

Reviews

[Sapphire Balasquez]

i love the imagery of each and every phrase, the idea is so ripping you away from earth and yet keeping you there. it's such a two-sided poem, and done in a very short amount of time. i like it very much!!!! i think you could add more to make it even more effective. i like the mention of fate in different forms too. ^^