Abandoned

Something I had to write for school

 

Abandoned for such a long time,

Everything is covered in grime.

The grass has long overgrown,

The state of unkempt is shown.

 

Standing alone against the setting sun,

For ages the building hasn’t seen fun.

A chain link fence surrounds,

Preventing people form entering the grounds.

 

Lights can be seen,

They shine bright through the torn screen.

The source to passerby is unknown.

In reality it is the sun whose light is shown.

 

The sun turning the sky pink,

I can’t help but to think.

All of our lives,

Are based off of lies.

Reviews

[Bare trees]

I'm a little unsure of the end and its relation to an abandoned house?