I Come

I come with severed limbs,

suicidal thoughts,

scars on my wrists,

broken, tired, and lost.

 

I come with pain reflected,

in moistened eyes,

I come, pain deflected,

by my inner lies.

 

I come clothed in black sin,

shed this evil dress,

I come garnished within,

clear the sin at this request.

Reviews

[Fire Mage Andrea]

Someone repenting of their sins maybe?
Another good emotional piece of poetry.

'I come clothed in black sin,
shed this evil dress,
I come garnished within,
clear the sin at this request' - the best verse in this poem.

[Anonymous722]

yes, thank you!

[Daydreamer]

((I come with pain reflected,
in moistened eyes,
I come, pain deflected,
by my inner lies.))
Absolutely gorgeous!💜

[Anonymous722]

Thank you!

[just Penny]

Deep, dark and with some vivid images. I really like:
"I come, pain deflected,
by my inner lies"
because it speaks of how we torture ourselves from the inside, feeding off a distorted reality.
A great poem that I enjoyed :) Penny

[Anonymous722]

Thank you so much! :)