My Sad Melody

time travels as my breath slows,

as my mind stops, time only grows.

I focus on bliss, whatever that may be,

but time conquers all -it is eternity.

I catch my tears within my fingers.

the tears soon dry, but the pain still lingers

I trace the scars haunting my memory,

they are the notes to my sad melody.

Reviews

[Daydreamer]

I love the fact that "my sad melody" was meant to be a description to the background of your mind. You keep thinking the same way or of usual thoughts, ending up with the same regular pattern of sadness....
Deep and so lovely💛

[Anonymous722]

yes, exactly. Thank you :)