Warning of the DamningA Chapter by Austin SmithPlease note that I am a Christian, not a satanist. Agnes is the antagonist. As always, I hope you enjoy, and review. I soon
found myself in a dark, warm place. Any thought of quickly observing my
surroundings vanished once I turned all around, so I did the only action that
any of my senses would give security to: I clung on to what felt like a
debris-covered yet seemingly stable ground below me. I could feel the sweat
running down my face, forming a paste with what felt like dirt as it ran.
Nothing but faint echoes and my heavy stressed breathing could be heard from
wherever I was. A putrid odor lingered all around me; it was an odor which I
did not recognize then, but have inhaled and choked on many times afterwards;
it was an odor that could only indicate suffering and hatred, or otherwise
complete uncaring. It
was the odor of burning flesh. I
did not stay in that position long, though. Something had interrupted the
already cloudy thought in my mind. “Welcome,
darling, to my proud abode.” It
was most certainly Agnes’ voice; hearing it made my fists clench in anger, and
my legs ready to charge in the dark. Yet I knew, somehow, that she wasn’t
addressing me. From what had happened earlier, I knew that she was talking to
Læona. “Don’t
mind the chains, dear,” she said in that condescending voice. “We wouldn’t want
an angel to drop in and see you out of here, now do we?” I
heard what sounded like chains tightening, and something else groaning in pain.
That groan resolved me; I slowly silently stood on my feet, which, I felt, were
bleeding from the falling and tumbling before. The voices were in front of me;
I ambled towards them . . . .
. . And tripped over a very hot jagged rock. “Well,
well, well,” that voice chided after my fall. “It seems that one of your
friends was caught in our little journey.” I
sighed in frustration. “Is she hurting you?” I
could hear Agnes’ cruel chuckle, and that soft-spoken, sweet, suffering voice
of Læona reply. “A little.” I
sighed again, but this time in relief. It was a relief, for me, that she
wouldn’t lie even in the presence and under the submission of the black-heart
witch. “I
hate to break up your lovely reunion,” Agnes interrupted sarcastically, “but we
simply cannot have your friend follow us, Læona.” With
that, she snapped a finger. The
snap echoed through what seemed to be tunnels surrounding us. My blood chilled
despite the temperature, and even more when I heard, and felt, something
swiftly pass me. There was a presence in these caves, one which left the air it
passed a burning passage. I strained to see it, but to no avail. I stood back
up as quick as I could, prepared as best I could to fight it. Yet
it soon became them. More
swishes came close, and many a cackling and cracking crawling accompanied them
in the distance. The sweat was leaping off of me now, and I soon became dizzy.
Every noise was meshed together; my thoughts soon after. Everything
became clear, however, when a monstrous claw, I believe, knocked me to the
ground. I slammed into the ceiling of wherever we were, and feel onto the same
jagged rock. Læona shrieked in terror. “Can
you hear what pain you have caused, my dear,” Agnes said hauntingly. “Can you smell the blood on the ground? Can you taste it in your mouth?” Everything
about her words frightened me, for I knew, beyond a shadow of a doubt, that
Læona could indeed smell my blood, taste my blood. I heard her whimpering; it
contorted my heart in knots. “Don’t
give in, Læona,” I shouted as I felt one of those things grab my leg. It was
trying to pull me away from them. “You need to resist her!” “You
need to fight me, Læona,” Agnes
whispered. I
became so infuriated about Agnes’ attempt to use Læona’s Pacifism that I kicked
the monsters dragging me. More flocked over to me, as I heard, but that didn’t
scare me more than the few I heard stalking towards the ladies. The thoughts
that came into my mind of the harm that could have befell Læona were too much
to bear; I ran as fast as I could towards what I could hear of her; the
growingly distant rattling chains. I
hit many rocks along the way; blood would have blinded me if there were any
light to not see. The rattling grew louder, to my relief, yet the cracking
crawling grew louder as well, to my great distress. There seemed to be no end
in sight. Finally,
just as I could feel the monsters’ breaths, I felt a chain drag against my leg;
I desperately reached out in front of me . . . .
. . And clung on to a body. It
was Læona’s; chains had enveloped her to the point where she was being dragged
on the floor on an inability to walk. Her hair was still long and smooth, and
her skin still bruised, to my relief. I would not let the monsters harm this
body any more than the world had already done. The
beasts grabbed my legs, and pulled me off of the ground. I was taking the limp
Læona with me, and Agnes’ progress was halted. “Haquazinn,”
she shouted. “What do you think you and the other demons are doing?” I
listened in disbelief, even though the proof was there, in the conversation, in
their slithery seeping accents. “It’s
the other human. It’s clinging on to her.” “I
thought I told you to take care of him!” “We
tried, Agnes,” another, more feminine, demon said. “We cannot harm him as long
as he clings to her. We cannot purge
betwixt them, or tear them in twain so long as she is nearby.” Hearing
this, I clung harder to Læona with a bone-crushing determination. I felt so
weak clinging to her, but I was afraid to lose my soul in this place. Agnes
sighed in frustration. “Fine. Let him be. He can see what I wish to show our
guest.” The
demons in the background cackled. “Is this the one you told us of earlier?” Agnes’
voice became, in a cruel way, cheerful. “Yes, she is.” They
cackled even louder, and released my legs. “Pray tell us how she fares with the
sight-seeing. The times which we obtain guests like this are ever and anon.” “I
will, Dhibiyon. Now, away, until we meet on the battlefield in The
demons crawled away from us, and Agnes continued to pull us away to only she
knew where. “I
am truly sorry, Læona,” I whispered. I could feel that I had broken her arm. Her
only silent reply was “Don’t let go.” We
were dragged for what seemed to be an eternity. After that eternity, however, I
saw a light. It was dim, and it was red, but it was light. Agnes dragged us
towards it, and as it became more intense, the temperature rose faster. By the
time it became unbearable from the dark, my breathing became gasping, and every
gasp brought in more of the burning flesh. Agnes brought us to a ledge. “Well,
here we are, Læona,” Agnes said proudly. “The main attraction.” I
was lying on the ground in exhaustion, so I couldn’t see what they were looking
at; I could see their beings, however. Læona was covered in a dark substance, and
her clothes had been ripped. Her eyes stared in fright, and tears ran down her
face silently. Agnes was, in human condition, perfect; not a scratch or a
bruise tainted her pale skin. I soon discovered that the paste that covered my
face was blood, sweat, and ash; dirt seemed to be absent from this nightmarish
place. I
regained my footing slowly, stared out into the open . . . and froze. It
was a lake of fire. The
heat waves dried my throat and my skin, and my body shook violently at the
blinding sight of figures thrashing all around. The demons by the millions, I
would guess, surrounded them, and bit them and gnashed onto their skin. The
screams were heart-pounding, the shrieks terrifying, and the cries deafening.
There was a gigantic chasm separating us and them, to my relief. Agnes
smiled. “Isn’t it wonderful?” Læona,
for the first time in our encounter, became angry. “How can you find joy in
this, Agnes? These people are suffering!” Agnes
approached her calmly. “How can you be angry at justice, my dear? All the bad
people come here, and suffer for their crimes. Are you surprised?” “Many
a time,” Læona began, choking on tears. “I have read in the Bible of the lake
of fire, and how it will cause suffering to those who reject Christ. I never
could picture it in my mind, though . . . the suffering!” She broke down into
tears. Agnes
became overzealous. “Oh, you haven’t seen anything yet! I have two people that
I must show you.” A sinister smile spread on her maniacal face as she began to
take smoke from the air, and form it into an orb. I watched as the black ball
lit up, and showed two images clearly. Their forms were unrecognizable, for
they were covered in lava; their shrieks, however, suggested that one was male,
and the other female. They were, to my surprise, holding each other as they
suffered. “These
two were the first people that I brought to this place,” Agnes said with a tinge
of hatred. “They thought that they could focus their attention on helping
others instead of giving me what I wanted.” She was becoming angry as she
spoke. “They had the money to give me everything, but they used it to help
others in need!” She spat that last
part out, then wiped the smoke away. “You know, killing them was probably the
best thing that I could have done, for once I did, your God allowed me to see
the suffering that I had caused unto them for eternity.” Læona
was bawling at this point. Agnes continued sinisterly. “I was proud of what I
did, and lucky that they were blasphemers. Seeing what happened to bad people,
I devoted my life to bringing people to hell, Læona.” “But
why?” “So
it would please Lucifer! Don’t you see, Læona, that there are so many
contradictions to your God, but Satan offers all justice?” I
was sickened by her. I was glad that I was not, and still am not, a Satanist,
and knowing that I could still avoid this torment. “But
you had to come along, my dear, and
attempt to ruin my work. Your Christianity, although I wish not to brag about
one of your faith, was better taught than that dilapidated church on the hill.
You provided some competition for me.” I
had to step in. “So, you cursed her to nightly torment because she was a
Christian?” Agnes
looked at me coldly. “You don’t know my true motive.” I
became cynical. “Oh, yeah? And what is that?” “DAMNATION!” She
cackled like the demons before, and stared at Læona as if she had some value. “Tell
me, child,” Agnes began to speak to Læona. “Do you think that Satan will reward
me greater for bringing him the soul of one who not only oppresses him, but has
the ability to bring our town to Christ?” “Agnes,”
I said angrily, although weary form dehydration. “Læona is a good girl. You
should take your wares elsewhere.” “This
town is full of people who are nonchalant and cynical about their very
existence,” she told me. “To me, they’re just decoration.” Læona
began to sing Ave Maria; I recognized it from her prayer she made when I was
sick. Agnes took on a new look: a look of anger. “Who
do you think you are, Læona Perdita Imogen, to sing that song? You were a
catalyst for me, a sign that I had to speed up my work, to bring justice to the
world. These people are suffering because of you!” Agnes
had reached Læona’s spirit; she sang no more. Then I did something that I
thought I would never do in my life. I
sang Ave Maria. “Silence,
you,” Agnes told me sternly. “You are nothing but a sinner.” Everyone is a sinner, Agnes. That’s why we
need Christ. “Ave
Maria, gratia plena-“ “Silence!”
She was becoming frustrated. Just because people don’t believe, doesn’t
mean that we should cast them down. “Dominus
tecum-“ Agnes
began to shake with fright. “Enough!” “Benedicta
tu in mulieribus-“ Something
caught the attention of both me and Agnes: Læona had fainted. I was close to
fainting as well; I needed water. Agnes recognized this, and smiled. “Looks
like your time is up here. I should get you home . . . after all, Læona, I need
you in full power for tonight.” She
began to chant, and I took the time to pick up Læona. She looked at me, and
smiled what she could. “Thank you, for the hope.” Everything soon warped, like it did
before, and we were soon back in her tainted house. It
took a while for me to regain my strength, but once I did, I looked out the
window. The sun had nearly descended under the hills, which meant that it would
happen soon. I
heard Agnes in the background, humming to herself. Without waiting for her to
appear, I ran for the door. Before I left, I looked at her, unconscious on the
ground, and said, “I’m
sorry, but I must warn everyone.” © 2010 Austin SmithAuthor's Note
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